The Southern Star – a poem by David Oates

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As a child, my dad would take me, on Saturday morning, with a couple of his friends, out fishing at Coverack in a beautiful clinker built boat called The Southern Star.  Going there recently, many years on, I found her pulled up beyond high water, much changed from the boat I knew.

 

 

Above the sea she sits

Beyond the reach of tide,

That source of strength

That breathes into dead wood

New life.

 

Ungainly, squat –

In element of air

Not water.

 

The keel that cleaved the bay

To cut the waves,

That rose and rolled

From sea-green depths,

Pressed hard on granite quoin

Of harbour’s sheltering arm,

Pulled far from surge of storm,

Her dancing days now done.

 

Her spring-time days are gone,

A story told by paint

That peels and shows

The timber flexed across her frame –

Her bones laid bare and

Bleached by sun and salty air.

 

Those lines so slick and smooth,

That slipped through seas,

Now jar my sight,

With cabin stuck, as if by chance,

Athwart her beam,

Machined and modern made

Without the care

Of craftsman’s hands,

– Devoid of life.

 

An alien shape set square

On lines that dip and curve

Reflecting elemental hand.

 

She sits and waits
For summer sun to climb

To season’s zenith

And call her home

To sea.

 

But in my soul she sails again,

And she and I are young.

This boat that like a bird

Would fly, would twist and turn

To take the mackerel in its flight –

Now sails the seas

That surge within my mind.

 

I felt her life,

I heard her song,

That she and I both shared

In far-off sunshine days

Those days of joy

My dad and I once shared –

From grime and gloom

Of factory floor released,

To break, for that brief span,

The bonds of earth

And set the spirit free.

 

 

David Oates is a Cornish bard who has published a history of Troon, entitled “Echoes of an Age”, a guide to Godrevy and Gwithian, “Walk the hidden ways” and a slim volume of his own verse, “Poems from the far west”. His unpublished work includes a reflection on a Cornish childhood, “What time do they close the gates, Mister?” and a fictionalised story for young people based on the extant life of St Gwinear, with the working title, “The son of a king”. David is working on another guide in the “Walk the hidden ways” series, entitled “Hard Rock country”.

David is a tenor singer with the well-known group, Proper Job based in mid- Cornwall and has collaborated with Portreath musician, Alice Allsworth, to write the lyrics for a number of songs about Cornwall and the Cornish.

David is a Cornish bard who has published a history of Troon, entitled “Echoes of an Age”, a guide to Godrevy and Gwithian, “Walk the hidden ways” and a slim volume of his own verse, “Poems from the far west”. His unpublished work includes a reflection on a Cornish childhood, “What time do they close the gates, Mister?” and a fictionalised story for young people based on the extant life of St Gwinear, with the working title, “The son of a king”. David is working on another guide in the “Walk the hidden ways” series, entitled “Hard Rock country”.
David is a tenor singer with the well-known group, Proper Job based in mid- Cornwall and has collaborated with Portreath musician, Alice Allsworth, to write the lyrics for a number of songs about Cornwall and the Cornish.

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